If I had it to do over ...
I would have used a good quality watercolor paper that would have let me scrub on it more ... I would have done my drawing of the ribbon more carefully so the words were better placed ... I would have taken the time to do an asymmetrical composition.
If you've found this interesting or helpful, drop me a line. If it seems useful to people, I might do it again with something else, maybe in a different style.
Karen